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Name. MI. Last
Hope to Find a Job Ave.
Desperately, Needing 12345
(555) 555-5555 ? email@blank.com

Objective

To obtain the office assistant position at the DMACC Dental Hygiene Clinic.

Education

Des Moines Area Community College, Ankeny, Iowa
Candidate for Associate’s Degree in Human Services
?Focus: Chemical Dependency
?Expected to graduate in

Work Experience

Gamers Inc. — Assistant Manager 10/2009 – 02/2011

?Prepare store for daily operations.
?Successfully handled payments including opening/closing cash drawers and preparing daily bank deposits
?Responsible for overseeing and managing staff goals and projects.
?Demonstrated excellent customer service skills by addressing client concerns and responding appropriately

CDAC Care Provider 12/2009 – 05/2011

?Shared joint responsibility for grandparent suffering from Alzheimer’s
?Assisted home nurse and hospice staff with all aspects of daily care, including bathing, feeding, and dressing
?Helped to ensure grandparent’s last year was comfortable, dignified, and enriching

Skills

?Operating systems: Windows 2000, XP, Vista, and 7
?Software: Microsoft Word 2007, Internet Explorer, and Mozilla Firefox
?One year management experience, punctual, hard working with the ability to quickly learn new concepts and skills, reputation as a team player and a passion to help others.

References available upon request.

Most of these bullet points are missing periods at the end.

Work Experience section:
prepared (past tense)
May want to add a specific example to the first, third and perhaps the fourth bullet points, especially to the first one.

CDAC Care Provider section:
Your grandparent? If not change to "senior"
enriched ing to ed (the tense needs to match the other two verbs)

Other suggestions:
You’re applying for an admin assistant position at a dental clinic. Find out what the job duties entail and find comparable experiences in your previous jobs and really focus on those key areas where you match up with the job expectations.

Good luck.


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  1. Most of these bullet points are missing periods at the end.

    Work Experience section:
    prepared (past tense)
    May want to add a specific example to the first, third and perhaps the fourth bullet points, especially to the first one.

    CDAC Care Provider section:
    Your grandparent? If not change to "senior"
    enriched ing to ed (the tense needs to match the other two verbs)

    Other suggestions:
    You’re applying for an admin assistant position at a dental clinic. Find out what the job duties entail and find comparable experiences in your previous jobs and really focus on those key areas where you match up with the job expectations.

    Good luck.References :

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